These are the openings I use on my own page and with clients. 30 of them, plus 10 I keep for the accounts that can carry them. Under each one is the shape it is built on, so you can write your own once the list runs out.
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Answer what you can. Every hook below rewrites itself around your words, and you can still change any single one.
Hooks that stop the thumb
Break the scroll reflex before the viewer has decided anything. These work by refusing to behave like a normal opening line.
01
If I woke up tomorrow with no audience and 30 days to fix it, here is exactly what I’d do first.
The shapeIf I woke up tomorrow with {starting position} and {a timeframe} to fix it, here is exactly what I'd do first.
Why it works
A reset fantasy. The viewer is invited to watch an expert solve their exact problem from zero, and 'first' promises the answer arrives quickly rather than after a preamble.
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Your starting position should be the one your audience is actually in today, not the worst case. Too extreme and they stop recognising themselves.
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02
Stop redesigning your feed if you actually want followers who buy.
The shapeStop {the thing they do} if you actually want {the result they want}.
Why it works
Names the comfortable task they are hiding in, then the outcome they claim to want. The gap between the two is uncomfortable enough to hold attention.
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Pick the busywork your audience genuinely enjoys. It only stings if they were doing it this week.
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03
Everyone tells you to post more. Nobody tells you what to post before anyone is watching. Here is a 60 second script you can save.
The shapeEveryone tells you to {the thing they do}. Nobody tells you {the hard part}. Here is a {a short time} {format} you can save.
Why it works
Three jobs in one line: it validates advice they have heard, names the gap nobody fills, then states the format and asks for the save. Saves are a ranking signal on every platform.
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The second clause has to be the real obstacle, not a smaller version of the advice. Write the bit people email you about.
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04
Never post another video before you do this one thing.
The shapeNever {the thing they do} again before you do {one specific thing}.
Why it works
A negative command interrupts autopilot on a task they perform constantly. 'One thing' is deliberately withheld, and nobody dismisses a single missing step in something they already do.
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It must be an action they take weekly or more. Rare actions carry no urgency.
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05
What happens when you go 90 days without once mentioning what you sell.
The shapeWhat happens when you go {a timeframe} without {thing everyone assumes is essential}.
Why it works
Frames an experiment rather than an opinion, so it reads as findings instead of a claim. The withheld result is the loop.
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The omitted thing should be something the audience believes is non-negotiable. The more obvious it seems, the better this works.
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Hooks that qualify
Qualifier-first. They lose you the wrong viewers in the first second, which is the point. DMs only come from the right people anyway.
06
If you're between 35 and 50 and you feel like you started this too late, these are the 4 things I'd do immediately.
The shapeIf you're between {an age} and {an age} and you feel like {what they are stuck on}, these are the {a number} things I'd do immediately.
Why it works
Age bracket plus a fear they have not said out loud. Being described that precisely is more arresting than any claim, and the numbered promise sets an end point.
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The fear has to be one they would not post publicly. Generic worries do not create the jolt.
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07
Online coaches with a goal to fill a program without ads: here are 3 things I’d never do again.
The shape{who you help} with a goal to {specific goal}: here are {a number} things I’d never do again.
Why it works
Identity and goal in the first six words, so the wrong viewer leaves and the right one leans in. Regret framing outperforms advice framing because it implies a cost already paid.
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Pair the role with a goal that role actually has. 'Stop working Saturdays' beats 'scale to 7 figures' for most trades.
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08
This is for creators who are brilliant on camera and hopeless at saying what they actually sell.
The shapeThis is for {who you help} who are brilliant at {their craft} and hopeless at {the adjacent thing they avoid}.
Why it works
Praises the competence first, which buys permission to name the weakness. Self-recognition rather than persuasion, so there is nothing to argue with.
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Lead with the strength. Naming the weakness first reads as an attack and they scroll.
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09
If you just turned 30 and you don’t want to still be posting into silence at 40, do these 3 things now.
The shapeIf you just turned {an age} and you don’t want to still be {what they are stuck on} by {a later age}, do these {a number} things now.
Why it works
A birthday makes the timeline feel real, and the feared future is stated as their words rather than a statistic. The deadline does the work.
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Use an age your audience has recently passed. The closer the birthday, the sharper it lands.
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10
If you’ve got 3,000 followers and the DMs have started, this is the one to watch.
The shapeIf you've got {a number} and you're already {the good problem}, this is the one to watch.
Why it works
A small number makes it checkable and honest, and pairing it with a good problem flatters while it filters. People at that exact stage feel seen.
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Keep the number genuinely small. Inflating it loses the people you actually want.
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Hooks that open a loop
Curiosity hooks fail when the gap is fake. Each of these opens a question the rest of your video can genuinely close.
11
Give me 20 seconds and I’ll tell you whether your niche is costing you followers.
The shapeGive me {a short time} and I'll tell you whether {what they are stuck on} is costing you {the result they want}.
Why it works
A bounded ask with a personal diagnostic at the end. The time limit removes the risk of watching and the diagnosis is about them rather than about you.
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Actually deliver the verdict inside the time you named. Overrunning trains people to distrust your openings.
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12
It took me 9 years to work this out and I'll give it to you in 40 seconds.
The shapeIt took me {a timeframe} to work this out and I'll give it to you in {a short time}.
Why it works
Compresses an expensive lesson into a cheap one. The contrast between the two numbers is the entire mechanism, so both need to be specific.
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Use your real number. A rounded decade sounds invented and the whole line rests on believability.
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Needs a real number
13
Here’s what I’d do in the 8 days before a quiet month turns into quitting.
The shapeHere's what I'd do in the {a number} days before {what they are stuck on} turns into {bigger problem}.
Why it works
Names a window that is closing and an escalation they recognise. Urgency comes from the consequence, not from a countdown timer.
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The escalation has to be one they have lived through. Invented stakes read as hype.
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14
3 questions I ask before working with anyone, and the third one loses me clients.
The shape{a number} questions I ask before {decision}, and the {nth} one {costly admission}.
Why it works
The admission is the hook. Telling people a step costs you something makes the other steps credible, and they stay for the one you flagged.
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The costly one must genuinely cost you. If it is a humblebrag people can feel it.
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15
Let’s find out which of these 4 is actually capping your reach, in about 30 seconds.
The shapeLet's find out which of these {a number} is actually capping your {the result they want}, in about {a timeframe}.
Why it works
A diagnostic with a small fixed set. People will watch to place themselves in a category, and the time bound removes the excuse.
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Four options is the ceiling. More than that and nobody expects to find themselves before scrolling on.
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Hooks that take a side
Contrarian hooks buy attention with risk. Be contrarian about a specific instruction people are actually following, never about a vague topic.
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If you want followers who buy, posting every day is the worst thing you can do.
The shapeIf you want {the result they want}, {the thing they do} is the worst thing you can do.
Why it works
Contradicts a specific instruction they are likely following this week. The disagreement is about a named action, which is arguable, rather than a vague topic, which is not.
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Be contrarian about a tactic people are actively using. Contrarian about a category is just noise.
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Higher risk
17
To everyone posting 3 times a day to beat the algorithm: stop that.
The shapeTo everyone {the thing they do}: stop that.
Why it works
Addresses a group directly and instructs rather than suggests. Anyone doing it stops to defend themselves, which is still watching.
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Name the behaviour precisely enough that people know whether they are being spoken to.
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Higher risk
18
After 11 years of building audiences, here’s what I wish someone had told me before my first video took off.
The shapeAfter {a number} years of {the thing they do}, here's what I wish someone had told me before {specific costly event}.
Why it works
Experience plus a named mistake. The specific event promises a story rather than a lecture, and the regret framing removes any sense of being sold to.
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Name the event, not the lesson. 'My first video that flopped' pulls; 'content mistakes' does not.
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Needs a real number
19
I’m going to say the thing almost no coach will, and it might cost me.
The shapeI’m going to say the thing almost no {who you help} will, and it might cost me.
Why it works
Promises withheld information and stakes at the same time. The admission of cost is what separates this from an empty tease.
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Only use it when what follows is genuinely uncomfortable. If it is not, you have taught your audience to distrust your openings.
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Use sparingly
20
You don't need a bigger audience. You need 12 people who can actually pay you.
The shapeYou don't need {what everyone chases}. You need {the smaller, realer thing}.
Why it works
Rejects the default goal and replaces it with one that sounds achievable this month. The small number is the relief, and relief holds attention as well as tension does.
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The replacement must be genuinely smaller. Swapping one enormous goal for another loses the effect.
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Hooks that show proof
The highest-converting group and the easiest to get wrong, because they require you to actually have the number.
21
I looked at 60 profiles last month. 54 of them made the same mistake in the first line.
The shapeI looked at {a number} {what they post} last month. {a number} of them made the same mistake in {specific place}.
Why it works
Two numbers and a location. Specificity is what makes a claim feel audited rather than asserted, and naming where the mistake sits promises a checkable fix.
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Use numbers you actually have. If you have not counted, count before you post this one.
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Needs a real number
22
Same idea. Same length. Different first sentence. 3,000 views against 400,000.
The shapeSame {constant}. Same {constant}. Different {single variable}. {the result they want} against {the result they want}.
Why it works
A controlled experiment in nine words. Holding everything constant but one thing is what makes the gap attributable, and attribution is what makes it worth watching.
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It only works if you genuinely changed one thing. Two variables and the claim collapses under any scrutiny.
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Needs a real number
23
This took 4 minutes to make and it’s still bringing me followers 8 months later.
The shapeThis took {short effort} to make and it’s still bringing me {the result they want} {a timeframe} later.
Why it works
Low input against durable output. The second number does the real work, because most people's results decay and theirs have not.
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The effort number must be genuinely small and true. Inflating the payoff is the fastest way to lose the people who would have bought.
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Needs a real number
24
I spent 2 years doing this the hard way so you don't have to.
The shapeI spent {a timeframe} {doing the hard version} so you don't have to.
Why it works
Positions the cost as already paid on the viewer's behalf. It converts a lecture into a gift, which lowers resistance to the advice that follows.
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The duration should be uncomfortable to admit. Comfortable numbers read as marketing.
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Needs a real number
25
Here’s exactly how many videos it takes before one of them lands. Most people stop 3 short.
The shapeHere’s exactly how many {effort unit} it takes before {the moment it pays off}. Most people stop {a number} short.
Why it works
Answers a question they have privately wondered about, then tells them they are quitting early. The second sentence is the hook; the first is just setup.
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The 'short by' number needs to come from your own data or it is a guess dressed as a finding.
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Needs a real number
Hooks that start conversations
Hooks that pre-frame a conversation, so the ask at the end doesn't feel like a swerve.
26
If you’re doing this one thing in your bio, message me and I’ll tell you what to change.
The shapeIf you're doing {the thing they do}, message me and I'll tell you {specific thing you'll give them}.
Why it works
A qualifier and a concrete return in one line. Naming what they get back is the difference between this and a bare invitation to DM.
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Be specific about what you will send. Vague offers get vague response rates.
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27
Send me your last 3 videos and I’ll tell you which one to do more of.
The shapeSend me your last {a number} {what they post} and I'll tell you which one to {useful verdict}.
Why it works
Presumes competence by asking for existing work rather than offering to fix them. That reframing is why this outperforms 'send me your problems'.
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Keep the number at 3 or fewer. Any more and it becomes homework.
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28
I’ll do this once for free and then leave you alone. No pitch after it.
The shapeI'll {the thing they do} once for free and then {explicit release}. That's the whole offer.
Why it works
The release clause is the hook. What stops most people replying is not price, it is the fear of being pitched forever. Saying it out loud removes the friction.
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You have to honour it. One follow-up too many and the tactic stops working for everyone who tries it after you.
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29
You don’t need another content strategy. You need someone to look at what you already have.
The shapeYou don't need {what everyone offers}. You need {what you actually do}.
Why it works
Rejects the category's default offer and defines a new one you own. It also inoculates against every competitor about to pitch them the thing you just dismissed.
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Only claim the ground you can actually hold. If your offer is the thing you dismissed, this backfires publicly.
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Higher risk
30
If your next 10 videos all opened like this, what would change?
The shapeIf your next {a number} {what they post} all {did this}, what would change?
Why it works
Ends on a projection they have to run themselves. Conclusions people reach on their own are the ones that make them message you.
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Keep the number close enough to feel real. Ten is imaginable, a hundred is not.
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The 10 bonus hooks
Harder to pull off, and worth more when you do. Each one asks something of you: a real number, a real opinion, or a real story.
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Your first sentence is doing 80% of the work and you spent 10% of your time on it.
The shapeYour {small component} is doing {large share} of the work and you spent {small share} of your time on it.
Why it works
A proportion mismatch the viewer can check against their own behaviour in about a second. Self-recognition, not persuasion.
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Both percentages should be defensible. If challenged, you want to be able to explain where they come from.
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Needs a real number
32
If you’re one of the coaches with a full feed and an empty calendar, this is the maths nobody shows you.
The shapeIf you’re one of the {who you help} with {good-looking symptom} and {what they are stuck on}, this is the {the thing nobody shows them} nobody shows you.
Why it works
A contradiction they live with but rarely hear named. The gap between how it looks and how it feels is where the attention is.
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The two halves must genuinely coexist for that audience. A false pairing reads as someone who has never done it.
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33
In 45 seconds I’ll show you the one number that decides whether a video gets pushed.
The shapeIn {a timeframe} I'll show you the one number that decides whether {desired event} happens.
Why it works
A single metric framed as the deciding factor. Reducing a messy problem to one number is a relief, and relief is underused as an attention device.
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You need a real number to show. This one collapses immediately if the payoff is a platitude.
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34
The advice that got me my first 10,000 followers would kill my account today.
The shapeThe advice that got me {early milestone} would {strong negative} today.
Why it works
Undercuts your own past advice, which is more credible than undercutting someone else's. It also promises a stage-specific answer rather than a universal one.
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Name both stages clearly. Without them it sounds like you simply changed your mind.
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30 seconds of advice I’d give my best mate if he were starting a page from scratch.
The shape{a timeframe} of advice I'd give {close person} if they were starting {what they post} from scratch.
Why it works
Reframes the content as private counsel rather than public marketing. People listen differently to what you would tell someone you love.
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Use a real relationship. Invented ones show up in the delivery.
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Comment the word NICHE and I’ll send you the exact template I use.
The shapeComment the word {single word} and I'll send you {specific named asset}.
Why it works
One word is the lowest-friction commitment that exists, and naming the asset rather than the benefit is the difference between this and 'comment YES'.
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Pick a word nobody types by accident, so your automation has something clean to trigger on.
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37
I charged $400 for this in 2019. Last week someone paid 6 times that for the same work.
The shapeI charged {old price} for this in {year}. Last week someone paid {multiple} for the same work.
Why it works
Price anchoring with a real timeline. It implies the constraint was never the work, which is exactly what an underpricing audience needs to hear.
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Use your real figures. This one invites arithmetic and people will do it.
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Needs a real numberHigher risk
38
If you've ever quietly lowered a price because you were scared they'd say no, this is for you.
The shapeIf you've ever quietly {small private behaviour}, this is for you.
Why it works
Naming a private, slightly embarrassing behaviour builds more trust in 3 seconds than a credential does in 30.
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It has to be a behaviour people genuinely hide. Anything they would happily admit to has no charge.
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There are 4 reasons people don't buy. Three are fixable and everyone works on the wrong one.
The shapeThere are {a number} reasons {problem happens}. {most} are fixable and everyone works on the wrong one.
Why it works
Sets a finite list, then says the viewer is probably misallocating effort. They cannot know which one they are getting wrong without watching.
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Deliver all of them. Listing four and covering two is the fastest way to lose a returning viewer.
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Posting more isn't your problem. Nobody can tell what you actually do.
The shape{thing they blame} isn’t your problem. {the real problem}.
Why it works
Removes the excuse they have been hiding behind and replaces it with a specific diagnosis. The relief of it not being about volume is what holds them.
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The diagnosis must be checkable in a few seconds by looking at their own profile or website.
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Endings that lead somewhere
The hook gets them in. This is what turns a view into somebody in your inbox, and it is the part almost everyone leaves off.
Ask for a comment
The lowest-friction ask there is. Name what they get back, not the fact that they get something.
Comment the word AUDIT and I'll tell you the one thing capping your account.
The shapeComment {single word} and I'll tell you {one specific thing}.
Why it works
One word is the lowest-friction commitment that exists. Naming what they get back, rather than the fact that they get something, is the whole difference between this and "comment YES".
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Pick a word nobody types by accident. If your comments fill with the word, the DM automation has something clean to trigger on.
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Which of those 3 are you stuck on? Just say the number.
The shapeWhich of those {a number} are you stuck on? Just say the number.
Why it works
A digit is easier to type than a sentence, so far more people do it. You also get a free segmentation of your audience in the replies.
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If that last bit annoyed you, tell me why. I'll answer every one.
The shapeIf {the contrarian bit} annoyed you, tell me why. I'll answer every one.
Why it works
Invites disagreement, which reliably out-comments agreement. The promise to answer is what stops it becoming a pile-on.
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Only use it if you'll actually reply. An unanswered argument reads as a lost one.
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Higher risk
Comment what you sell and I'll write you one of these, free.
The shapeComment {their context} and I'll {the thing they do}, free.
Why it works
The CTA is the offer. It costs you 10 minutes and buys a warm conversation with someone who has just self-identified as your buyer.
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Say "send it" and it's yours.
The shapeSay {2 words} and it's yours.
Why it works
3 words, no decision to make. Works because it asks for less effort than deciding whether to bother.
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Tag the one person who needs to hear this.
The shapeTag the one person who needs {this}.
Why it works
The only ask on this list that recruits a stranger. "The one person" beats "someone" because it turns a vague request into a specific act of recall.
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Ask for a DM
Moves the conversation somewhere you own. Works when the thing you're offering cannot be delivered in a caption.
Send me a DM with what you've already tried. I'll tell you why it didn't work.
The shapeDM me {what they've already done}. I'll tell you {why it didn't work}.
Why it works
Asks for something they already have rather than something they have to produce. The diagnosis is worth more to them than an offer would be.
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I'll do this on your account once, for free, and then I'll leave you alone.
The shapeI'll {the thing they do} once, for free, and then {explicit release}.
Why it works
The release clause is the whole CTA. What stops the DM isn't price. It's the fear of being pitched forever. Say it out loud and the friction disappears.
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My DMs are open and I answer them myself. That's it.
The shapeMy DMs are open and I answer them myself. That's it.
Why it works
Signals no funnel, no assistant, no automation. In a category where everyone is running a bot, being reachable is the differentiator.
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Don't say this if a bot answers your DMs. It's the one claim people test immediately.
Higher risk
If you're stuck on this, message me. No pitch, I promise.
The shapeIf you're {specific situation}, message me. No pitch, I promise.
Why it works
Names the objection before they do. "I promise" is doing more work than it looks like. It converts a claim into a commitment.
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Send me your last 3 and I'll tell you which one to do again.
The shapeSend me your last {a number} and I'll tell you which one to {repeat}.
Why it works
Presumes competence. It assumes something they did already worked. That framing gets a far higher response than offering to fix what's broken.
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Ask me anything about this. I'd rather answer it than post about it.
The shapeAsk me anything about {topic}. I'd rather answer it than post about it.
Why it works
Positions you as a person rather than a channel, and quietly says your content is downstream of real conversations.
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Send them off-platform
Every platform throttles these, so the reason to leave has to be worth the tax.
The full thing is in my bio. It's free and there's no email wall.
The shapeThe full thing is in my bio. It's {free} and there's no {friction they expect}.
Why it works
Naming the friction that isn't there removes the reason they'd hesitate. Everyone assumes a bio link costs them an email.
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Link's in the bio. 4 minutes and you'll have your first one.
The shapeLink's in the bio. {a timeframe} and you'll have {first result}.
Why it works
Prices the ask in time rather than money, and makes the payoff immediate. "4 minutes" survives scrutiny in a way "instantly" doesn't.
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If you want the thing that actually does this, it isn't in this video. It's in the bio.
The shapeIf you want {the real deliverable}, it isn't in this {content}. It's in the bio.
Why it works
A deliberate withhold. Because you said what the video wasn't going to give them, the link reads as an answer rather than an ask.
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There's a version of this you can keep. Bio, no card.
The shapeThere's a version of this you can keep. {where}, {what it doesn't cost}.
Why it works
"Keep" is the operative word. It converts a video they'll forget into an asset they'll own.
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Everything I just said is written down properly. Bio link.
The shapeEverything I just said is {written down properly}. {where}.
Why it works
Acknowledges that watching isn't the same as having. People who liked the video want the version they can search.
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I put all 30 in one place so you're not screenshotting a video.
The shapeI put {all of it} in one place so you're not {the annoying workaround}.
Why it works
Names the thing they were about to do and offers to spare them. Solving a small irritation converts better than promising a large benefit.
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Keep the video alive
Endings that buy reach rather than leads. Use them on content that is meant to travel.
Save this one. You'll want it the next time you sit down to post.
The shapeSave this. You'll want it {the specific moment they'll need it}.
Why it works
A save is the strongest signal short-form platforms read. Naming the future moment gives them a reason beyond vague usefulness.
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Send this to the person you always end up talking about this with.
The shapeSend this to the person you always end up talking about {topic} with.
Why it works
Everyone has that person. Describing the relationship rather than asking for a share does the recall work for them.
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Share it if it helped. Don't if it didn't. I'd genuinely rather know.
The shapeShare it if it helped. Don't if it didn't. I'd rather know.
Why it works
Permission not to act is the reason this gets acted on. It reads as confidence rather than need.
Screenshot the second half. That's the bit that matters.
The shapeScreenshot {the specific part}. That's the bit that matters.
Why it works
Directs attention backwards, which makes people rewatch. Rewatch is the cheapest retention you'll ever buy.
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Follow if you want the rest, one of these a day for a month.
The shapeFollow if you want {the rest of the series}, {cadence}.
Why it works
A follow is a bet on future value, so name the future value and its schedule. "Follow for more" names neither.
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Come back to this in a week and see whether it still holds.
The shapeCome back to this in {a timeframe} and see whether it still holds.
Why it works
An unusual ask, which is why it lands. It implies you expect to be right, and it manufactures a reason to save.
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Close the thought
No ask at all. The strongest ending when the video has already done the work.
P.S. If you got this far, you're not the problem. The order you're doing things in is.
The shapeP.S. If you got this far, you're not {the thing they blame themselves for}.
Why it works
Absolution at the end of something long. The people still reading are the ones who care most, and this is what makes them message you.
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If you want help with this, that's literally what I do. No pressure either way.
The shapeIf you want help with {the thing}, that's literally what I do. No pressure either way.
Why it works
States the commercial fact plainly instead of hinting. Plainness reads as confidence; hinting reads as a funnel.
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I'm not going to pitch you at the end of this. Just go and do it.
The shapeI'm not going to pitch you at the end of this. Just go and {the thing they do}.
Why it works
Refusing the ask is the ask. It buys a level of trust that a soft pitch spends. Use it when you're playing a long game.
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Try it once. If nothing changes, ignore everything I've said.
The shapeTry it once. If nothing changes, ignore everything I've said.
Why it works
Shrinks the commitment to a single attempt and hands them the exit. Both make the attempt more likely, not less.
You don't need me for this. But if you'd rather not do it alone, you know where I am.
The shapeYou don't need me for this. But if you'd rather not {do it alone}, you know where I am.
Why it works
Concedes the sale before making it. Removing the dependency is what makes the offer credible.
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Do it today, not Monday. Monday is where this goes to die.
The shapeDo it today, not {the deferral}. {that} is where this goes to die.
Why it works
Names the specific way they'll avoid it. Being caught in advance is more motivating than being encouraged.
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Nothing matches that. Try a shorter word.
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